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Enchanting, the colours are beautiful. I also love the fantasy mood :la:
I'd also like to suggest a few things. First of all, from your very nick and comment below this artwork, I see that you have a lot of humbleness in you. Just needed to say this ;)
I'd watch out for too much of brightness in this piece. There are some areas which are white. No matter on what kind of screen you have, you may try to use histogram to give you a hint if some parts are too bright or dark. It's got to do with photography, here is an article that could be helpful: digital-photography-school.com…
In my view, the sky and planet have too much of white areas. I'd also try to get some more details from the left upper corner (right now it's just a big black triangle). 
From composition point of view, I'd also place the model a bit more to the center. Just more or less 150-200 pixels from the current corner. In this way you give the composition a bit more space, it may be a good idea - then the beautifully lit mushrooms could be placed in full, without the need to cut them (it may distract the viewer's eye). 
Keep it up, it's a good start and nice to see such a touching and atmospheric work :clap: